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breathe in the mist,
it'll help to straighten your head
I can't stomach anymore
of this never-ending
sleepless wandering  
because the path leads from the house
to somewhere faraway
all I can do is pray
you return each day

but don't worry
you're not too far lost
you still shine like a diamond
in the rough
you still smile like there's nothing
creeping up
and you pretend you're fine
so I pretend that that's just fine

don't send a letter
you know, I won't believe the words
don't say that you'll soon be mine
I can't watch the clock
I can't keep with the time.
to me,
the only thing changing
is the pace of my breathing
so hurry before the oxygen stops streaming

but don't worry
they're not listening now
they hope that we'll just
bring each other down
so run away
like you were never here
and if I find daylight
maybe I'll see you there
:iconsimplesilksky:
if anyone knows the song "little talks" by monsters of men, this was actually written to the tune of that
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:iconmidnight-disasters:
I think I'm gonna have to start drawing pictures to understand your poems
What were you doing when you wrote this
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~SimpleSilkSky Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
uuhh I was...I wrote the first draft at school on Friday. and please I would love to see you try to draw a competent picture based on this
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~SimpleSilkSky Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
can't wait
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:iconmidnight-disasters:
Maybe I'll see you there
Making passionate poetry together on the horizon
*Inspirational lines*
*Dark depressing lines*
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~SimpleSilkSky Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yep. ha you have learned the formula for poetry good job
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*CarmineDevian Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
great song and great poem =)
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~SimpleSilkSky Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
cool thak you C:
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*CarmineDevian Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
youre welcome =)
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*SimplyCass Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! It's awesome...again I can definitely relate...and yeah good song too
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